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echoes reverberated found place in my heart, still resonates not knowing into how many hearts

Saturday, July 28, 2012

DIFFERENT FORMS

YOU SEE ME 
YOU SEE ME NOT 
THE ICE ABOVE
THE WATER BELOW

THEN YOUR SUNSHINE
I TAKE THE FORM 
HAPPY AND GURGLING
JUMPING FROLICKING

THEN YOU TORTURE
ME TO KNOW FURTHER
MY SUSTENANCE
AND I TAKE DIFFERENT FORMS

I RISE ABOVE 
IN SPIRIT FORM
TO REACH ABOVE 
MY HEAVEN

AND THEN POURING DOWN
AGAIN WHEN
I AM NEEDED 
AGAIN ANOTHER TIME

17 comments:

  1. A powerful, intimate personification of rain! Delightful!

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  2. A delightful little story of rain. Nicely done.

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  3. Good description of the "different forms"--especially:
    HAPPY AND GURGLING
    JUMPING FROLICKING
    ...creates a great picture.

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  4. I love the way you portray the different forms of water. Very imaginative - and accurate.

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  5. Oh water! An ode to the essence of physical life. Well done!

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  6. Jossina,

    A tribute to the greatest gift and much needed by so many, rain and water.
    Having rain is so important, although here in the UK we have had so much recently, that we still await the sunshine of summer...

    Eileen

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